I think I need a few more lines to wrap up the first scene of a thing, though those lines may not all be appended to what I've got written, because the scene as currently drafted neither (1) has someone mention in Adrien's hearing that Marinette's supposed jealousy of Lila is over Adrien (2) has anyone apologize to Marinette or do more than begin to react to it being clear Lila was lying from the start like Marinette has been saying for ages (3) has anyone behave in a manner consonant with Lila ensorcelling them, no matter how nasty a hit that enchantment just took—but the scene as drafted takes Lila and Adrien both offstage before the last paragraphs written
To cover the first bullet point in the outline. Of thirty-five. And maybe half the second; I don't know if Adrien will infer the thing the second bullet says he hears or not, but I think he now could.
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(I hate getting longfic ideas, I never finish them)
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Date: 2019-06-07 10:06 pm (UTC)I think I need a few more lines to wrap up the first scene of a thing, though those lines may not all be appended to what I've got written, because the scene as currently drafted neither (1) has someone mention in Adrien's hearing that Marinette's supposed jealousy of Lila is over Adrien (2) has anyone apologize to Marinette or do more than begin to react to it being clear Lila was lying from the start like Marinette has been saying for ages (3) has anyone behave in a manner consonant with Lila ensorcelling them, no matter how nasty a hit that enchantment just took—but the scene as drafted takes Lila and Adrien both offstage before the last paragraphs written
and then I really wanna get to the next scene
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Date: 2019-06-07 11:16 pm (UTC)...it is twice as long as it was an hour ago
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Date: 2019-06-08 12:19 am (UTC)Well done!
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Date: 2019-06-08 12:22 am (UTC)...except now it's fourteen hundred words.
To cover the first bullet point in the outline. Of thirty-five. And maybe half the second; I don't know if Adrien will infer the thing the second bullet says he hears or not, but I think he now could.
/o\
(I hate getting longfic ideas, I never finish them)
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