Just Create - Syllabulary Edition

[silvercat17]

It's the weekend again!

What are you up to? What have you gotten done?

Comments

[alexseanchai]

you understand why I am pleased with the line! but it has a job to do and it doesn't seem to be doing it!

[soc_puppet]

Yes, I can definitely see that 😂 Anyway, I know you usually prefer to let the readers make their own connections/do their own work, but you could potentially keep the line if you were willing to let the readers do a little less work. Like, spend a couple of sentences or so describing Catwalker, then throw in something like, "The effect was rather like if someone had taken one of the four generals from early Sailor Moon and turned him into a Disney Prince" or similar. That might be leaning a bit too far away from your personal style, though.

[facethestrange]

As soon as I googled Catwalker, the line made PERFECT sense, and I'm not even in any of these fandoms! I think it's an awesome one! :D